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There's also the detail that Leone's partner in 1986 had been with Arson before coming over to Homicide. So Leone might have picked up some specialized Arson terms. Kip is right: The question is, what term would a modern veteran cop be likely to use? If the cop would use "firing," and nobody understands it, I can (a) leave it and let 'em look it up, or (b) change it to something that still fits but is easily understood by the reader. My group also balked at "jape" for "joke," but my dictionaries don't say that the former is obsolete or archaic. And it's used by the narrator, an educated person. So that's gonna stay.
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Ok, I now have an answer. I've been involved in two arson investigations in Aurora, CO. In neither one did any cops or arson investigators use the word 'fired'.
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Was there a kiln involved? That could change everything.
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I'll give you a true vignette about the Aurora police that you might be able to work into your novel.
The two arson investigations I was involved with occurred at a condominium complex in Aurora where I was resident manager. In the late 1980's the decline in the oil industry brought lots of foreclosures to the complex and investors bought the condos which in turn brought some white trash renters into the complex. This was also the time at which thong bathing suits first hit the market. A hot young woman on the cutting edge had purchased a thong and was lounging around the pool. A white trash renter brought her kids to the pool and threatened to beat up the hot young woman if she did leave or put on another bathing suit because she was corrupting her children by exposing her fine ass. The hot young woman called the Aurora police and reported the threat. The Aurora police responded in atypically quick fashion. They took the white trash aside and scolded her while re-ass-uring the hot young woman that they would look out for her safety. Every five minutes, for the rest of that day, a different patrol car would show up at the pool with two officers fulfilling their civic duty of visually inspecting the threatened portion of the woman's body and making sure she was free from any bodily threats. Of course, the young woman also asked the resident manager if he would keep an eye on her to make sure her excursions to the pool were free of bodily harm. He told her he was happy to oblige. On a similar theme, the condos were hard wired with smoke detectors. One day, a smoke detector malfunctioned bringing a fire truck to the complex. The resident wasn't home so I had to open the door for the firemen. Turns out the resident was a professional dominatrix with the tools of her trade arrayed in the condo. Needless to say, this quickly became a multiple alarm call with many stations responding to give additional aid.
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It should be firings. Two houses, two fires.
In the kitchen it means to start a dish, as in "Kerry! fire one beef, one chicken!"
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My take is you have decission weather to make the script 'authentic' to the period and characters. Or one present people would understand. Eventhough it is in Colorado, is the cop from New Orleans? Then he'd use jargon (thanks previous poster) that matches. You could even write in some discrepency of jargon used in the different locals during that time.
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You use what your verstand tells you to.
Cops and firefighters in their street argot may call it torching or Jewish/Sicilian Lightning,just as most do,but when it comes down to wording a report, firing is correct. |
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(Kerry, I love the stories. I may not be able to use these here, but they're going into the mental hard drive for use in the future!) .
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