Update, and a Q
Thanks for the tips on St. Paul, folks. I've changed the car to "an early-'90s Mercury Grand Marquis," as PaulC suggested, and the street I mention to Como Avenue, as The Swede suggested.
I'm about 5 pages along, and I've hit one of those nasty speed bumps -- the kind where you realize something in your plot doesn't jibe with human nature. Would you believe that a 25-year-old woman, educated and well off, in this day and age would either (a) not have a cell phone, or (b) not know how to work it?
Yeah. Me neither.
Under what circumstances would such a woman to leave her phone completely off for two whole days -- yet still have it with her -- while she travels east to visit a relative?
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-- Paul W. (The Benzadmiral)
('03 Buick Park Avenue, charcoal/cream)
Formerly:
'97 C230, smoke silver/parchment; '86 420SEL, anthracite/light grey; '84 280CE (W123), dark blue/palomino
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