As I approached her, I tripped over my tool box. I landed at her beautiful bare feet, took out my soft wet brush, and wiped away road dust.

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1999 w140, quit voting to old, and to old to fight, a god damned veteran

example guys, she reached into my pants, and pulled out my 44 mm 6 point socket.

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1999 w140, quit voting to old, and to old to fight, a god damned veteran

For sale: Perambulator. Received as a gift, never used.

I wish I could use words well like many do, there's lots of stories and ideas I'd like to share .

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-Nate
1982 240D 408,XXX miles
Ignorance is the mother of suspicion and fear is the father

I did then what I knew how to do ~ now that I know better I do better

I should have not tried, as was in good mood that day, which is rare

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1999 w140, quit voting to old, and to old to fight, a god damned veteran

Start by just writing them down in your own voice. Then set it aside for a few weeks and go back to it. Cut as many words then as you can. Look for the word 'that' in your writing and take it out.

Start with thousands of words and cut them down to hundreds of words.

It takes some time to get the hang of it. But if you keep it up you will.

However, I've been writing for many decades and still don't think I'm any good at it .

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-Nate
1982 240D 408,XXX miles
Ignorance is the mother of suspicion and fear is the father

I did then what I knew how to do ~ now that I know better I do better

Let someone else read it and trust what they tell you.

At one point in my life I attended a screenwriters group of amateur screenwriters. The guy that ran it asked me to show up and help others to trim down their writing.

A person would read about twenty minutes of their script and then the rest of the group would tear it apart. In every case the story was improved.

The hard part for most people is their bruised ego. News flash: Hollywood does not care about your ego. They care about how cheap they can make a film.

Find a book called The Hero With a Thousand Faces. It reduces storytelling to what has worked for the last ten thousand years.

It is plane to see this thread augers no good weal amongst those of the wrenching tool set.

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“Whatever story you're telling, it will be more interesting if, at the end you add, "and then everything burst into flames.”
― Brian P. Cleary, You Oughta Know By Now